Tuesday, November 9, 2010

The lonely walker


I wander through the loose mornings
so different from those spent together
which had so much of our absurd chats

I drift through the aimless afternoons
so different from those spent together
which had so much of our savoured lunches

I walk through the solitary evening
so differnet from those spent together
which had so much of chit-chat coffee breaks

I tramp through the lonely dusks
so different from those spent together
which had so much fun driving together

I roam through the empty pre-nights
so different from those spent together
which had so much of our naughtiness

I stroll through the sleepless nights
so different from those spent together
which had so much of our togetherness

I maunder through the dreamy dawns
so different from those spent together
which had so much of our shared dreams

And I wish I could turn back the time
again and again to relive those moments

13 comments:

Beyond Horizon said...

lonely walker treasuring beautiful memories of beloved!! loved it!

Ritz.. said...

Dreamy it was .... the whole poem ... all in trance ... nice:)

Ritz..

Vishal Raj said...

@Beyond Horizon: Thanks.
@Ritz: Thanks.

Viyoma said...

Beautiful!!

Vishal Raj said...

@Viyoma: Thanks a lot Viyoma !!

Deepika Vasudeva said...

its good. memories last forever.

Vishal Raj said...

Thanks a lot, Deepika !!

ritika said...

Lovely, i could remember my lost love!! :((

Vishal Raj said...

@ritika: If its lost, it could never be love, or I guess so. And thanks for your comments. And never be sad for anything. :-)

Aashi said...

being alone doesn't always mean being lonely....and yet sometimes footsteps beside you leave a warmth somewhere deep within...cherishing that warmth is the truest way to be fulfilled when alone...


beautiful words vishal... :) i wrote a little on solitude...ur poem is far better and different...but somehow somewhere it reminded me of this...

http://insatiablemelody.blogspot.com/2007/06/and-there-i-stand-so-aloof-so-apart.html

Vishal Raj said...

@Aashi: You said it very true. I agree with you whole-heartedly. I am glad you liked my words. Thanks a lot for your appreciations. Your link says that you've been writing since long time. And though the essence of our writings are very different, you are no less good than me. Thanks once again.

tikulicious said...

Lovely verse Vishal. You write beautifully. Keep sharing.

Vishal Raj said...

@tikulicious: Thanks a lot Tikulli Mam. I am just am amateur, nowhere close to you perfections.

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